Question

REVISE: One day, it was summer. My friends and I were hanging out and so we went to the store. Then we bought snacks and drinks. We ate them because we were hungry. After, we were tired and went back home.
(Use as many senses as possible – sight, sound, touch, taste, smell)

Answer 1

Answer:

One day in the summer, my friends and I were hanging out. All of a sudden, we were hungry, so we walked in the sunny sun to the store. We talked on the way there, laughing at most. In the store, we bought snacks and drinks. They tasted fine. I mean, it was a snack, not the main meal. After eating, we were tired and bored, so we headed back home. At home, I took a nap. It was very relaxing.

Explanation:

One day in the summer, my friends and I were hanging out. All of a sudden, we were hungry, so we walked in the sunny sun (describe the sun, sunlight) to the store. We talked on the way there, laughing at most (or whatever you did to get there and what you did on the way). In the store, we bought snacks and drinks. They tasted fine. I mean, it was a snack, not the main meal (how did it taste and what did you think of it?). After eating, we were tired and bored (your feelings at that moment), so we headed back home. At home, I took a nap. It was very relaxing (or what you did after that).

Answer 2

One summer day, my friends and I decided to go to the store to buy some drinks and snacks to enjoy together. Since the weather was excruciatingly hot, we decided to look for the coolest items we could find. After browsing through our options, we picked out the coldest popsicles and iciest drinks. Going back outside, we were hit with a sudden heatwave. However, thanks to our refreshments, we were not bothered. After enjoying our food and the wonderful scenery, we left and went back to our cool and conditioned homes.