Athena tell Telemachus to sail to Delphi and Troy and ask king Nestor and King.
Answer:
The poem describes a single scene; The memoir describes many scenes.
Explanation:
The poem uses few words; the memoir uses many words. The poem has short lines and stanzas; the memoir is written in prose paragraphs. The poem shows an outsider’s point of view of Rosa Parks; the memoir does not. The poem compares Rosa Park’s gaze to a flame; the memoir does not.
So basically all are correct I believe. Check twice Just in case!
Answer:
He avenges Caesar and killed himself by running into his own sword.
Explanation:
After having learned of the death of his allies, Cassius and Titinius, Brutus attempt one last time to battle the Romans commanded by Antony and Octavius but lost.
During the battle he saw the ghost of Caesar and believed that it was his time to die, so he asked to one of his men to hold his sword while he runs against it to kill himself. He impaled himself and declared that Caesar should himself avenged.
I hope this answer helps you.
I think it's number me while Road in storytelling and socially hpw did the kids how did the kids feel so storytelling
Answer:
If you want the honest feedback, I got you. I was really good, but I have a few suggestions to make it sound more "official":
- Italicize sounds (i.e. change "Thud!" to <em>Thud. </em>in the second paragraph)
- Make sure formatting is reasonable and consistent: "1 month later" is too big, the title should be bigger and "Beanbag" is incorrect (it's bean bag)
- Suspense would work very well in this story. I wouldn't reveal who the speaker is until the last paragraph or even last sentence. To do this, you can touch more on the emotional aspects of this story in the introduction and body paragraphs (no naming names, places, things, etc.) Make it abstract as you can to build up to the answers: Who is talking? What happened to them? Why do they feel this way? Things like that.
- Stop being so repetitive with words like "demon" (maybe substitute for "little devil" or "menace")
- I see the humorous aspect of this story, but I would make sure to not include too many spelling and grammar mistakes.
Sorry if my suggestions are a little too intense, but I can tell you are a good writer and can easily improve in these areas! Please let me know if this helps!
