Question

1) What is the best explanation of what needs revising in the following sentences?

Answer 1

Answer:

D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order

Explanation:

I took the test.

Answer 2

Answer: D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order

Explanation:

I took the test, but here is my explanation. If you look at the very first sentence, and look at the third sentence, you can see that it kind of connects. But it is blocked by the second sentence which throws off its arrangement. I believe that the answer is D.