Question

Which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?

Answer 1

To improve the clarity of the paragraph above, SENTENCE 1 should be re-written. The structure of the sentence and the choice of words should be reconsider. A simple sentence can be used to express the fact that if was difficult driving to the fair on that day. For instance, the sentence could read:

Driving to the fair today was a challenging experience.