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just olya [345]
2 years ago
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Why does the summary need to be revised?

English
2 answers:
andreyandreev [35.5K]2 years ago
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The summary being spoken of is culled from this passage;

  • As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.

This summary ought to be revised because;

  • C. The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas.

In the passage above, we see a summary that lacks cohesion and structure because of the lack of transitions at the beginning of sentences.

Transition words make sentences easy to read because they link up ideas. Examples of transition words are, however, since, but, though, etc.

The above summary lacks these transition words that connect ideas. Therefore it has to be revised for better comprehension.

Learn more here:

brainly.com/question/18561416

8090 [49]2 years ago
6 0

Answer:

c) the summary lack transition that connect ideas

Explanation:

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