Is this a good poem? Red is the colour of blood Red is cool Red taste like a sour apple Red makes me mad Red is my favourite col

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Is this a good poem? Red is the colour of blood Red is cool Red taste like a sour apple Red makes me mad Red is my favourite col

our With the blood that has derived from us We are born and killed with it Driving in an endless red bus until we get hit Our nation has breed from this colour But our heart meant another Red is our dollar

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Juliette [100K] · Answer 1 · 2022-08-23T13:29:14+03:00

Juliette [100K]2 years ago

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Yeah! Very deep and well-thought-out. Awesome work!

Gnom [1K] · Answer 2 · 2022-08-23T14:53:34+03:00

Gnom [1K]2 years ago

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It’s very good but I say you should add apostrophes