The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
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What do you mean? are we supposed to have read that book or is that something else?
Hobbit is the story of the small beardless creature that has invited many of the people on the adventure trip of the mountains.
The answers are:
He is curious about the world around him.
Is that the mountain?
what are moon letters?
These are the right answers to the inferences about Bilbo's character in the chapter Hobbit. And also the second answer is correct as it supports the best excerpt from the chapter Hobbit. The chapter is all bout the adventures of the mountains of the friends with a fun and various ways of enjoyment.
To know more about the chapter and the excerpt Hobbit, refer to the link below:
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A tiny beautiful flower that is red.
I hope this helps
