The answer to this question is A
<span>B. That was the most worst movie I have ever seen. </span>
Answer: C. The tournament is a fun way to spend time with friends while helping a worthy cause.
Explanation:
The options include:
A) Softball is a great way to get some much-needed exercise.
B) The money raised by the tournament will help local animal shelters.
C) The tournament is a fun way to spend time with friends while helping a worthy cause.
D) Even if you don’t have any softball experience, you can form a team and participate.
The sentence that would best express the main idea of a speech arguing that people should participate in a charity softball tournament is option C "The tournament is a fun way to spend time with friends while helping a worthy cause".
This shows that while the individuals can spend quality time with their friends, playing the tournament is also vital in achieving a worthy cause.
OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
