The two novels being analyzed are Alice's Adventures in Wonderland written Lewis Carroll and Harry Potter and Sorcerer's Stone by J.K. Rowling. Both novels have the main character traveling through a magical world. The adventure does not begin for either character until they enter that fantasy world. The authors of both books do a great job of using humor and fantasy to capture the readers attention. Each novel has its own special qualities, but one argument is for sure, both books are fantasies.
Secondly, the author of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland uses humor and fantasy to appeal to both children and adults. This novel would appeal to children because of the many fantasy creatures, such as a talking rabbit, a disappearing cat, and soldiers made out of cards. A child pays more attention to a book when the characters are fantasy creatures.
Answer:
By just reading the beginning, I can tell it's pretty good! A few suggestions: Try not to use "also" in the beginning of a sentence. I feel like it sounds a bit unprofessional. This sort of goes for "this also". One last thing, when putting in the name of an article for example, make sure to put quotes. I would also recommend to state where you cited textual evidence, not really for articles, but just for the future. Besides that, looking good!
I know it's pretty late but I thought I'd still respond
Definitely self conscious <span />
1. (knocked)
2. (obey)
3. (boils)
4. (flew)
5. (received)
6. (left)
7. (cried)
8. (teaches) (goes)
9. (is going)
10. (invented)
11. (move)
12. (talked)
13. (rained)
14. (galloped)
15. (went) (was asleep)
16. (will attend to)
17. (originated)
18. (tried)
19. (studied)
20. (wrote) (hope)
21. (shines)
22. (made)
23. (rained)
24. (have to do)
Sorry I couldn't answer the rest...please correct the answers above if I'm wrong!! :)