Answer: Yes, it just needs more body!
Explanation: I like the plot line, if you add more excitement to the story via adventures then I’d say you have a nice book going!
Theme : Little things can make a big difference
In Antigone the Chorus is made up of a group of Theban men. They represent the deeply embedded patriar society that Antigone defies.
Act III, scene ii. Brutus and Cassius enter the Forum with a crowd of plebeians. Brutus explains to the crowd that Antony had no part in the conspiracy but that he will now be part of the new commonwealth. The plebeians cheer Brutus's apparent kindness, declaring that Brutus should be Caesar.