The best answer for this question would be:
<span>The paragraph is choppy and in need of transitions.
It lacks the transitions needed in the passage. It doesn't flow right, and the topic jumps from one another making it a confusing passage to read. </span>
Answer:
It would convey that it was <em>actually</em> written by one
Explanation:
There is a television crew coming to do a story on it. this is the answer
Ya see you do the thing that happens when thing happen to be done
