You should try to add adjectives. For example:
1) The hardworking farmer
2) A gorgeous lady
3) The playful puppy
4) A mysterious detective
Just suggestions. :)
The proffesor will grade her paper by evaluating the criteria as listed on the rubric.
It is imagery, repetition, tone
B, “awesome”, the student grumbled at his lunch, “fish head again”.
This is sarcasm, because the student grumbled, meaning that the student obviously don’t like the fish heads, (who does?). Therefore, the student is going against what he actually means, so it’s an example of sarcasm.