23 year -old- man who lives in florida with his wife jane and just got married and had no children, they are taking a honey moon to florida. once they arrived at florida they decided they needed to go back to florida and fly to Pakistan. instead its was there 25 year old daughters birthday and scene it was the color purple it was to late to go to the park in the afternoon so they arrived shortly to class and went to Jurassic park at the schools pumpkin patch.
The revision that correctly uses formal style is "Some would argue that Hermione forgives her husband's past cruel actions too easily, but this detail..."
<h3>Characteristics of formal style</h3>
A text written in a formal style will present the following characteristics:
- Formal vocabulary, that is, words that are not commonly used in daily conversations.
- Sentences with inverted structures or in the passive voice.
- An impersonal tone, that is, a lack of opinion or feelings toward the topic.
That is why option C is the best answer for this question. All other options use words that evoke feelings and express opinions. Option C, on the other hand, maintains a more formal style and impersonal tone.
Therefore, the correct answer is:
"Some would argue that Hermione forgives her husband's past cruel actions too easily, but this detail differs from Ovid's story because Galatea has no past at all."
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B. Although i want , is the correct answer.
The sentence that is more clear to the readers is -Neil Armstrong, before he became the first man to walk on the moon, was an aerospace engineer, naval aviator, test pilot, and professor – that’s quite a list of accomplishments!
Explanation:
Considering the other options
1)Neil Armstrong before he became the first man – to walk on the moon – was an <u>Aerospace Engineer Naval Aviator</u> Test Pilot and Professor, that’s quite a list of accomplishments!-This statement is grammatically incorrect because commas are missing between two words like Aerospace engineer naval aviator
2)Neil Armstrong before, he became the first man to walk on the moon, was an Aerospace Engineer. Naval Aviator Test Pilot and Professor, that’s quite a list of accomplishments-This statement is also grammatically incorrect because Full Stop(.)is used instead commas(,) needs to be used.
3)Neil Armstrong before he, – became the first man to walk on the moon, was an Aerospace Engineer. Naval Aviator Test Pilot and Professor, that’s quite a list – of accomplishments!- This statement is also grammatically incorrect because - should not be used ,in appropriate use of commas.
