Answer: Sarai should choose the first one.
Explanation: It appeals to people's emotions but also gives information to Sarai's cause.
Answer: I don’t see them, but this one would be correct (- - means underline)
The -earth- is made of four -layers-.
Explanation:
‘The’ is an article.
‘is’ is a linking verb
‘Made’ is a verb
‘of’ is a preposition (if not it is an adverb)
‘Four’ is an adjective.
That leaves earth and layers as the nouns, and they should be underlined.
Religion has changed by becoming more of a space for advertisers to push their products, and Jesus has become part of the family be appearing in the parlor. Faber says that the message of Christianity has changed so much that it's almost unrecognizable, and more of advertising than religion.
Catch the reader's attention with a hook and the story should be very interesting like thriller, romance, horror and thing that seems eye-catching to some readers (Everyone has their own different genre that they like and dislike). Use good grammar.
OR
You can do something, vignette. And probably end it with a cliff-hangers, its fun hearing people saying "Oh! When you gonna make more of that. I wanna be the first one to see it!"