Thesis statement:
Throughout ones life, someone must stay courageous, ambitious, and have determination to overcome the obstacles and struggles that life throws at them.
or
Thesis: When one is facing challenges in life that are hard to overcome, it is always important to keep one's dreams in mind and believe in themselves in order to overcome those obstacles and challenges.
Answer:
Caleb died in an event that was out of anyone's control while Roberto was released.
Explanation:
Original:
Successive governments have consistently failed to ring-fence a significant annual fund for cycling provision<u>,</u><u> </u>from within the transport budget. We have been joined by the Automobile Association Australian Cycling and Shane Page<u>, </u>in supporting calls for an annual budget of $20 per capita. We urge all parties to pledge this fund in their election manifestos. Australia leads the world in competitive cycling - it is time<u>,</u><u> </u>we did the same for our commuters.
Answer:
Successive governments have consistently failed to ring-fence a significant annual fund for cycling provision from within the transport budget. We have been joined by the Automobile Association Australian Cycling and Shane Page in supporting calls for an annual budget of $20 per capita. We urge all parties to pledge this fund in their election manifestos. Australia leads the world in competitive cycling - it is time we did the same for our commuters.
(I'm pretty sure you remove all of the commas in this paragraph)
