I don’t know the context here but i think it would be beneficial for an author to put a character in, in the spring or summer time
Love & Lust and how they are fickle because after one meeting they fall desperately in love
The author can show the character development
in many different ways. One of which is that the author must research about the
character's basic facts. For instance, if the character is a doctor, the writer must
read books related books, interview doctors etc. This method will also lead the
author to establish a well-written history of the character. The author must be
creative and make his character like a living person.
<u>A. She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.</u> This sentence is the best revision that tells all necessary details.