The community center is good for everyone to do all kinds of fun things when they want. (wordy and unclear) This sentence uses too many words with clauses that confuse the reader. Another way to express the same could be: “The community center provides fun activities for everyone”

The proposed program will give every student in the county access to tutoring services. (clear and concise) This sentence is easily read since it does not use many words to express the main ideas.

Installing recycle bins at key points around the city will make recycling easier for our residents. (clear and concise) This sentence is easily read since it does not use many words to express the main ideas.

Many people have said there are not enough security guards at the mall, so the mall is unsafe and dangerous, and people don't want to shop there. (wordy and unclear) This sentence uses too many words with clauses that confuse the reader. Another way to express the same could be: “There aren’t enough security guards in the mall so people think it is dangerous and unsafe to shop there.”

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Read the passage from Eleanor Roosevelt’s speech on the adoption of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.

mr_godi [17]

Answer:

The rhetorical device which is used by the Gladstone Murray used in the passage is the contrast.

Explanation:

This is because the central fact is used fundamentally for the different men. There have been improvisations by different men. There are different persons which gets distinguished from other man. Two men are compared on the basis of their different nature and the varied facts. There are certain basis and the distinguishing facts of the civilisation which is used for contrasting.

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4-The neighbors will start to believe that Les Goodman is an alien.

At this point in the teleplay, The neighbors are starting to become paranoid. They don't understand why the power is acting so sporadically. The suggestions that have been offered as to the source of this strange occurrence had them believing in aliens. In the excerpt, the people are described as staring at Les Goodman's house and being "desperately frightened by it." These clues indicate that they are suspicious of Les Goodman, not trusting allies or happy for him.

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Type of verbal . Participle , gerund, infinitive. What's the verbal phrase??!?

Fed [463]

Crossing- present participle

Crossing the street is dangerous and illegal- phrase?

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