Answer:
ok ammm where's the question in here ?
Answer:
Dr. Naismith first planned to bring outdoor games inside, but they were too physical and cumbersome.
Explanation:
Eliminate repeated words.
Other comments:
'Two' is a number. 'Too' means extra or more than expected-- too many, too much, too late. . .
Two should not be too many to count!
Also be careful to use correct verb forms (planned) (were) to express past tense.
Answer:
The day he started his career
Explanation:
If george is making a career planning timeline then, he should include how he started to get to his goal
Answer:
I can't see much of it clearly, although I can help you with the second question
Explanation:
They already left the village before the sun rose
As soon as she finished cleaning the floors, she started gardening
After I posted the letter, I realised I had written the wrong address.
A) first person
First person uses I, me, my
He is telling the story from his point of view so it would be first person!
