I think that the best way is making a friend or teacher check it before you turn it in. So they can give feedback, catch errors, or anything else
        
             
        
        
        
The first one has the good punctuation;
Let"s play ball ; I'm up to bat first (a semicolon)
hope I helped !
        
             
        
        
        
I have no idea and please be specific Aimee who?