The above question wants to analyze your writing skill. Also, you have not provided the text that should be edited. For these reasons, it is not possible to answer your question, but I will show you how to answer it.
First, you will need to read all the text and sentences to which the question refers. This reading must be able to point out elements of the text that must be edited, as they do not promote exact meaning, deviate from grammatical rules, and do not promote fluid and optimized reading.
During your editing, you should pay attention to the textual structure, which is the order in which the information in the text is presented. You must also identify whether the use of passive and active voice is correct.
<h3>Correct use of passive and active voice</h3>
- Passive voice: The subject does not promote the action of the verb, but suffers this action. Ex: The wall is painted by Dan.
- Active voice: The subject promotes the action of the verb. Ex: Dan is painting the wall.
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Dr. Jose rizal was a Filipino nationalist, novelist, poet, ophthalmologist, journalist. and revolutionary. He is widely considered one of the greatest heroes of the Philippines. He was the author of noli me tangere, El Filibusterismo, and a number of poems and essays. H e was executed on December 30, 1896, by a squad of Filipino soldiers of Filipino soldiers of the Spanish army.
( June 19, 1861-- December 30, 1896)
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Henley, Patricia. The Hummingbird House. Denver: MacMurray, 1999.
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Krugman, Andrew. "Fear of Eating.” New York Times 21 May 2007, late
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Aristotle. Poetics. Trans. S. H. Butcher. The Internet Classics Archive.
Web Atomic and Massachusetts Institute of Technology, 13 Sept.
2007. Web. 4 Nov. 2008. ‹http://classics.mit.edu/› - website
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Certain specimen cannot thrive in areas of high temperature.
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to occur unexpectedly and have destructive or harmful effects
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