Question

Take a few minutes to write a short paragraph describing an experience you have recently had. Pick a location you went to or an event you attended. Once you have finished, read over what you have written. Now, write a second paragraph. In it, you will repeat the information from the first paragraph, but you will choose your words more carefully. Ask yourself questions like: What words capture this image exactly? What is the best word to convey how something looked, or how I felt? Take more time with the second paragraph. Your response should be at least 150 words in total.

Answer 1

This exercise is about a short paragraph describing an experience I had recently.

What is the first paragraph?

The first paragraph is as follows:

When going on a trip, it is better to carry all the required gear.  You must plan ahead, use a map, and even ensure that all necessary precaution has been taken.

It is important to decide how you want to travel.

• Is is by air
• by sea
• by land?

If it is by land, will you use the train or will you go by car?

Some people like to incept a travel insurance. They study the location they are going to and ensure that they know the culture of the people in the location they are going to.

What is the second paragraph?

It is preferable to bring all necessary equipment before traveling. Planning ahead, using a map, and even making sure that all necessary precautions have been done are all required.

When making vacation plans, you wan to ask the following questions:

• Will it via land, sea, or air?
• Will you travel by rail or by vehicle if it is via land?

Some individuals like purchasing travel insurance. They do research on the area they would be visiting and make sure they are familiar with the locals' culture.

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