Answer and Explanation:
You forgot to say that this question is about "Marriage Is a Private Affair." The moment when the father affrms that women must remain silent is a moment when we can perceive a generation gap. This is because the father was raised in a generation in which women were oppressed and limited, they had no rights and could not occupy prominent positions in society. However, for the child, women must be subjected to quality education to promote a more egalitarian and fair society, where women are of great importance, as well as their words.
Daedalus and Icarus is the story of a Greek father and son who were imprisoned in a tower. To escape, Daedalus constructs two sets of wax wings. They fly out of the tower and over the ocean back home. Daedalus warns his son Icarus that he should not fly too far up or he will fly too close to the sun and the heat will melt his wax wings. Icarus refuses to listen and flies higher and higher over the sea. Soon his wax wings melt from the sun and he crashes into the sea and drowns. Daedalus has to watch his son drown knowing there he could have done. This greek legend is often used as a fable, the moral being always listen to the advice of your elders/ wise advice.
"in the snow *was one of.."
"offers more *then a time for *children to have fun.."
"to do in the winter now and it's unfortunate.."
"..find the wintertime unpleasant"
"should *go outside and enjoy.."
"I am glad I grew up where it snows"
I recommend these changes as well as limiting the number of times you say snow and replace it with a different word, as well as using more descriptive adjectives