Conquering hearts is a matter of love and therefore not violent or warlike as conquering citadels, as that would require an act of war. Love versus war...
Answer:
Rannie, Liam, and Piper each own a pet. Rannie likes to hear his pet sing.
Explanation:
- If in this question you are asking to correct the grammar in the sentence, I capitalized the first letters of each persons name because they are what is called proper nouns . The names of people places or corporations . For example: Person: John Place: Jamaica Corporation or organization: Cherry County High School , Forever 21 or Amazon.
- When you are writing things in a list form in a sentence there has to be a space after each item or thing that you are listing, but before you list the last last thing that you have on your list you should include a conjunction. Conjunctions connect different possibilities or options in a sentence.
Example: "Would you like to eat pizza, rice or sushi?" Or " I would like some strawberries, tomatoes and potatoes from the store".
Adding commas prevent a boring runny sentence like, "Would you like some pizza and rice and sushi?"
Note: It is important that when you are writing that you don't add conjunctions after every word . Its better to list all the items and before you add your last option use a conjunction and end your sentence with your last option.
3. If you notice , after the period the word pet I added a period and capitalized Rannie. Rannie is a proper noun so it is capitalized but whenever you complete a sentence using a period (.) You start your new sentence with a capital letter .
Example: I went to the Amazon yesterday. I found the new iPhone at the store and it was on sale so I bought it. After I bought the phone I went home.
The answer is a sentence.
I think your essay is wonderful! You said your opinion in your first paragraph, then stated why in the next ones. Also the big if is pretty cool. Keep on writing essays and lapses will be corrected. Try to proofread and check the spelling so that it will be better.
