Question

Danielle is writing a thesis statement about the impact of indirect characterization on the development of the plot. Read her thesis statement and answer the question that follows.
In "The Ascent" by Ron Rash, there are many things that the author does with the people in the story to make the plot go.

What should Danielle most focus on when revising her thesis statement for formal language?

Her use of first-person pronouns
Her use of slang
Her topic
Her use of academic vocabulary

Answer 1

What Danielle should most focus on when revising her thesis statement for formal language is:

• Her use of slang

What is slang?

Slang is an informal language that has no place in academic writing. Slangs are also not required in thesis statements because these stress the main point of the text which will be discussed in more detail.

In the thesis above, Danielle's use of slang like; "to make the plot go" is inappropriate. Danielle should use academic language to show the progression of events in the plot of the story.

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