This is a very sound essay! I’d say read it out loud to someone you know and see if they also have feedback but really the only thing I can recommend is some smoother transitions
Answer:
hlo
frd
do you remember this guy
am PrathamBack
I think I know u or this account name
ya I heared this 21 Shakespeare.
ok sorry if ur not that ,
and sorry for ur time waste
Have a great time