The revision that will make the sentence more precise is this: I HAVE SOME CHANGES THAT I BELIEVE WOULD MAKE THE TRAFFIC LIGHT SYSTEM WORK BETTER.
This sentence is more precise, because it gives accurate information about the intention of the speaker. The original sentence was a little bit confusing because of the word choice of the speaker but the revised version chose the right words to express the speaker's intention.
Answer:
In visual rhetoric, the choice of an unusual text font not only affects readability but also may prevent your message from getting through at all if the audience finds it too distracting.
Explanation:
Hey, this is Mr. Mungall, your teacher--and since I created this content and own the copyright, I suggest you call me so I can help you with the content directly.
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