Question

“i remember the first time i rode a roller coaster. it was terrifying.” use one of the techniques you noticed to rewrite this moment in a way that slows down the narrative to focus on details, feelings, etc. in the moment.
please answer i will mark you brainliest!!

Answer 1

Answer:

“I recall the time I first discovered the thrills of riding a roller coaster. Chills was running down my spine and my palms sweating continuously. My breath started speeding up and my whole body starts to tense up. I feel my bones shivering and my stomach dropping when the roller coaster rushed downwards rapidly.

“Never again”

I thought to myself.”