The mistakes:
• “I hear you will go to Paris last month”
Should be- “I heard you went to Paris last month.”
• “I am sure you will.”
Should be- “I’m sure you did.”
• “Will you see Sophia...”
Should be- “Did you see Sophia...”
• “I did heard Ridley...”
Should be- “I did hear Ridley...”
• “I will see our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
Should be- “I saw our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
• “He will be doing very well.”
Should be- “He was doing very well.”
• “It was called U.T...
Should be- “It is called U.T...”
• “You must saw it.”
Should be- “You must see it.”
That’s all! The main problem through out this passage was the tenses. The mistakes should be put into past tense.
Hope this helps; have a good day! :)
Answer:
Uncle was shot by the Nuer men. Salva is numb with shock but surprisingly his uncle's spirit is in him. The group treats Salva like a child, shares no food with him, and makes him feel unwanted.
The men are from the Nuer tribe. They may have singled Uncle out because he was the leader and had a gun. Their laughter was evil means that Salva can hear the danger in their voices and perhaps he has some
inkling of what they may do.
Explanation:
Hope this helps.
Yeah it means like you do something because something happened so like say people are talking about me then I get paranoid because I think everyone does then talking about me because I heard one person yes and that is what it means to not try to switch up the definitions in your little head
The sentence that best avoids plagiarism by paraphrasing is B. Aspartame and saccharine are two sweeteners that have given consumers reason for concern, because of both real side effects and unfounded fears.
<h3>What is Paraphrasing?</h3>
This refers to the edition of a text to change the content of a text without affecting its meaning.
Hence, we can see that from the complete text, the author wants to make a revision without committing plagiarism and option B best does this for him.
Read more about paraphrasing here:
brainly.com/question/24729251
#SPJ1