Millions of dollars have been spent by taxpayers on programs to improve education. Which revision offers the most improvement in
sentence fluency? Programs to improve education cost millions of dollars, and taxpayers need to pay for them. Taxpayers have spent millions of dollars on programs to improve education. So much money has been spent on education by way of taxes. Programs endorsed by taxpayers have also been funded by taxpayers.
Programs endorsed by taxpayers have also been funded by taxpayers. it's this one because even though u can have a ,and with a fanboy it doesn't have the most fluency as the last one.
The answer is<em> B: Taxpayers have spent millions of dollars on programs to improve education. </em>
This sentence (B) improved the fluency of the original sentence because it is organized in a direct order. First the subject <em>(Taxpayers</em>), and then, the predicate (<em>have spent millions of dollars on programs to improve education</em>.) <em>It's clear and easy to understand</em>, differently from the unnecessary use of the Passive Voice: "Millions of dollars have been spent by taxpayers on programs to improve education."
