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No I said no, i wont be here,not here on my daddy's land one day I'll have land on my own
Shouldn't all people drink milk ?
Shouldn't all men have mustaches ?
Why isn't that girl wearing a dress ?
Why isn't he playing a sport ?
Why doesn't he work out ?
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So what would be the question you are asking? if you're asking how to hook a reader in your intro start with an onomatopoeia or something like: On a dark and stormy night Elle Mist sat in the corner of her room crying wondering when her parents would come home.