O. Henry's uses third-person narration in "After Twenty Years" affects the story as:
- it allows the reader to get to know each character.
O.Henry uses third person narrative to build surprise until the end of the story. Third person narration gives an insight of the story not through any character's perspective rather through a third person. This helps the writer to hold the climax of the story until the end.
Answer:
Ok I don't have both answers but I do have one of them:
"Pity me, and pardon me, O virtuous reader!
Explanation:
If i find out the second one I will come back
The sentence which most improve the sentence by adding description is this: 'there are plenty of vegetables, flowers, and plants at the community garden where I work. This sentence is descriptive in nature and tell us some of the charactersitics of the place where the speaker works.
Answer:
This is really good!!
Explanation:
I really enjoyed your writing and I like how you have set this story up!! The story is extremely intriguing and I almost didn't want to stop reading. I love your descriptive language and it makes the story feel alive. The scenarios feel real and its easy to put yourself in the place of Winter (who is an interesting character) and feel sorry for her and her situation. The one thing I think that could help this even more is maybe some even more descriptive words when describing her running away from Cain (she heard every leaf crunch under her feet and cringed at the thought of him hearing her, she felt the cold breeze and stiff air more than ever alone in that tree and she sat in the short amount of safety that was given to her in that moment, she heard Cains manic laugh echo through the forest, ect.). I feel as though this could make that scene even more better than it already is!! :)
I love this idea and your creativity! Keep writing, this will be amazing!!
