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Answer:
Gordon should revise sentence 1 to provide specific details about what "struck" him as he first entered the room.
Explanation: Read the paragraph from Gordon's personal narrative.
1 When I first entered the room, I was really struck by what I saw. 2 It was my first day of cooking lessons, and I was on my way to fulfilling my dreams of one day becoming a chef in my own world-renowned restaurant. 3 I had spent countless hours of my childhood watching my parents, both professional chefs, prepare savory meals for my sisters and me. 4: From them, I had already obtained a solid foundation of cooking basics. 5 : However, it was in this room that I would build upon those basics and begin my ascent as a chef in my own right.
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Answer: because his treasure is the love of his father expressed in the form of lectures telling him to work to be better. His treasure is stability and a home, even if he lets school work slide in favor of sports, just as Lemon Brown's music and honor are his treasure.
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Answer/Explanation
The Treaty of Versailles could have been improved in many ways. First, more countries could have helped pay for the damage, The treaty gave some German territories to neighboring countries and placed other German territories. It would have been a more settled argument if they used the 14 points which were general and not bias.
(How would change it to make it better)
First, more countries could have helped pay for the damage because all of the countries took part in this war. This also could have been improved because the treaty of Versailles only blamed one country.
