...You could describe it as not just making or leaving tracks behind on mars, but in another way. As if you left tracks in everyones brains. (I don't know, at least I tried)
Answer:
If you remove parentheses your sentence should be alright. If it lacks logical ending/meaning then You have put the parentheses in wrong place.
Things to do in Charleston South Carolina:
Go to the historic homes
go to the battery
go the fort Sumter
go see rainbow row
go on the ferry
go on the dinner cruise
go to the SC aquarium
go to waterfront park (there is a pineapple fountain btw might be an interesting point of view)
go see where the historic battles were fought
see the governors house
see Darrius Rucker's house
go to some of the historic plantations
and a must see and do is go to the market
