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<span>Add: This is just one example of the benefits schools get from offering music classes to their students.
This sentence follow best because it references, specifically, offering music classes versus "music students" which is inaccurate. It implies there are other benefits beyond just graduation rate, which most would agree there are (cultural, etc).</span>
<span>The words he has chosen which are "difficult, force, crooked, struggling, tangled, fallen, fear, faint, and hungry", shows that he is going through quite a scary and tricky time, but it was hard for him to pass that swamp, and you can see he chose excellent words on how his journey was like. Plus the words " struggling, fear, and hungry", shows what difficulty he is going through and you as the reader imagine yourself in that position and you would feel it all scary on how he is experiencing it.</span>
