Why is it ironic that the animals train for and unite in battle against the neighboring Farmers? the farmer's have food that the
animals want but even after winning the fight the animals don't get it. the animals win the fight for freedom from humans only till later lose their freedom to other animals. the farmers win the battle and control the farm. the animals win freedom in a fair and just Society.
i also use wattpad and i kind of had writers block but your a talented writer as i read your story and loved it most readers love long chapters so keep that in mind
