You should put comma next to a word that will separate the meaning of the sentence, so your sentence will make sense after all.
Do you have a picture or is it a written answer?
1-Simile 2-metaphor 3-personification 4-imagery 5-also imagery unless you made a mistake 6-metaphor 7-simile 8-imagery 9-imagery 10-simile
Some thing thats going forward.