A cell phone addiction is more likely to be prominent with women, women tend to use social media more.
Remove the comma after apples and put a comma after upstate
<span> to convey the horrors and barbarity faced by millions of slaves due to the oppressive laws of the state to criticize the white population for celebrating liberty while enforcing slavery on the black population </span>
Furthermore, Mr. Schlosser's appraisal is not comprehensive but a hodgepodge of impressions, statistics, anecdotes and prejudices.