you're correct^^
Bis the answer :3
if it does not have a works cited page or part at the end then it is not trustworthy ^^
You need to provide the text so we can see what type of document it is
Answer: Is this a multiple question? If so, I could probably help if you showed the multiple choices.
Explanation:
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option B. The best critique to explain why Henrique should revise the paragraph is that he needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive. In literature a commonly used device is the one of descriptive language. Basically, descriptive language is used to create a picture of the scene/character in the reader's mind. Henrique's story is laying the order of events in a logical order but it is lacking the descriptive language that will give details to those events, making the reader to engage with the story line.
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Explanation:
Subject- The longest, most boring day of his life
Predicate- ended with a thud.
