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No improvement or correction is required
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Answer:
Okay so
You're writing a story. (Sorry mate, I ain't doin your work)
Imagine like you're there, in that person's point of view. Be descriptive. So like you could have fallen, got a scratch, and it scarred, or you could have been stupid like my brother and jumped off a roof and only broke your arm trying to fly when you were younger, describe how the pain felt. Describe what the injury would look like. Was it light? Was it dark? Was it bad? Then Describe on how long it took to heal. like if it was a broken arm, I'd say 4-6 weeks, depending on the break. and if it is a broken arm, did it require surgery? You have to be very detailed in your writing. Good luck there, m'dude.
Explanation:
B. He is jealous of Caesar
