In this question, it is important to remember that the revision phase of writing happens after a final draft is written. This draft is used as the basis to discuss anything that can be improved. <u>Check that the sequence of events makes logical sense</u> is correct because it would avoid contradictory events and clarify the structure to readers. <u>Modify the writing in responde to feedback from peers</u> is also important because the peers are a group of readers that can help identify any inconvenient things.
Ok this is probably late since I just got this as a district writing FSA sample thing but you can write about peer pressure, mental health (specifically depression) and how rewards impact decision making. :)
Denel can at present, without doubt, be regarded as a public monopoly. The absence of competition can thus induce the monopolist to decrease production and so to increase prices.
In "the necklace," to pay for the lost jewels, the Loisels must <span>work hard for ten years to repay the cost. </span> I am considering the last choice! Hope this helps. ^.^
