Some things that you could do is you could break this big long paragraph into 2 paragraphs so it doesn't seem boring to the reader. Maybe use more transition words to make seem very good, and check if you good vocabulary.
But other than that it's just information about your partner so you don't need to go all out on this assignment.
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Explanation:
Today I woke up at 7AM and I was in a good mood for doing my job. I felt that it will be good if I go to the city and sell those new fruits that I got. I drove to the city with my big truck and when I got there, I saw that there is a bunch of people. I asked ''What is going on today?'' and people told me that it is Carnival today and it will last for four days more. I was happy to hear that and when people saw those new fruits they started to buy it a lot. There were fresh strawberries and everyone told me that they looked beautiful. I was so proud of myself. I stayed at the city during the whole day and I will do it for the next four days. I met many people who are doing trading job just like me and it was a really good day. I got home at 9PM and I was really tired. I felt asleep in 10PM and it was so good to be home.
True
I really don’t need 20 characters to answer
Answer:
no
Explanation:
u shouldn't discourage kids no matter what
