Does this sound correct? I want to double check. Cuando limpio mi dormitorio, limpio los alrededores de mi habitación. Yo barrer
las astillas de madera de la estufa. De esta manera, mi sección de la casa está limpia, siempre y cuando todo el mundo limpia su área, la casa se mantiene limpia. Escribo listas, me ayudan a recordar las cosas. Cuando escribo una lista, no me olvido de barrer. When I clean my bedroom, I clean the surroundings of my room. I sweep the wood chips off the stove. This way, my section of the house is clean, as long as everyone cleans their area, the house stays clean. I write lists, they help me remember things. When I write a list, I do not forget to sweep.
Thanks
Yo barrer would correctly be yo barro also you said as long as the world keeps their area clean it would correctly be cuando todos limpian su area. Hope this helped otherwise everything else was perfect great spanish!
