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kari74 [83]
3 years ago
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Which revision best uses dialogue to improve the sentence? “Yup, it was a big surprise,” I told them. “I’m excited that my paint

ing was selected! Especially since I felt so incompetent at the beginning and the competition was so ruthless.” “Honestly, I was surprised,” I told them truthfully. “The competition was ruthless, and I felt incompetent at the beginning. It’s really exciting to have my painting selected!” “I’m in! My painting is in! I feel a fist pump and a little dance coming on,” I said, grinning. I thought about how I felt so incompetent at the beginning because of the ruthless competition. “Did you hear?” I asked them. “My painting got selected! Exciting, right?” I smiled. “Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that the competition was ruthless!"
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Ber [7]3 years ago
5 0

The answer is D. A dialogue involves a <em>exchange of opinions</em>, like a conversation towards a particular subject. <em>Even</em> an <em>inner dialogue</em>, not talking directly to the people, <em>still</em> passes important information that help the audience understand things not so obvious. In sentences A, B and C, phrases like "I told them" and "I said" don't seem to indicate a dialogue. <em>But in D, "I asked them" invites the audience to a conversation.</em>

yulyashka [42]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

I am not sure what the actual answer is... try C., but it is not D. !!

Explanation:

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