They should consider dates and times
to grab the reader’s attention by using understatement to talk about brutal acts... i hope this helps
<span>The tone of the final words of the speaker is ominous. He is implying that the duchess is dead without outright saying she is thus. From a certain point of view, it could even be argued that he implies that he may have had a hand in the duchess' smiles stopping.</span>
Is there supposed to be a photo? :/
