Answer:
This is actually kinda for you to have done this in 5 minutes
Explanation:
The only thing I would say is to use more detailing words.
But good job!
D. Take out while. the sentence becomes the choir director is out of the room.
"'To turn your households' rancor to pure love.'" The Friar is using the marriage as a way to fix his problem with the different houses.
