Question

Select all of the sentences that need to be more clearly written. When the dog ran after my dad, he cried. The dog ran after my dad and tried to bite my dad in the leg. I talked to my teacher last night, and she was busy getting ready for the next day. Samantha angrily gave Heather a dirty look at lunch today, and she got really upset about it. Al really wanted to give his dad a great birthday present; he would really enjoy a new car.

Answer 1

I talked to my teacher last night, and she was busy getting ready for the next day.

Samantha angrily gave Heather a dirty look at lunch today, and she got really upset about it. 

Al really wanted to give his dad a great birthday present; he would really enjoy a new car.

When the dog ran after my dad, he cried. 

Answer 2

When the dog ran after my dad, he cried. needs to be written differently so that we know who cried (dog or dad)
Samantha angrily gave Heather a dirty look at lunch today, and she got really upset about it. needs to be more clearly written so that we know who got upset
Al really wanted to give his dad a great birthday present; he would really enjoy a new car. needs to be written differently so that we know who would enjoy a new car.


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