I would say A is the right one
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option B. The best critique to explain why Henrique should revise the paragraph is that he needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive. In literature a commonly used device is the one of descriptive language. Basically, descriptive language is used to create a picture of the scene/character in the reader's mind. Henrique's story is laying the order of events in a logical order but it is lacking the descriptive language that will give details to those events, making the reader to engage with the story line.
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8. How come you know so much about this?
9. How fast can she run?
10. What sort of trouble is she in?
you should start it with an opinion. for example : Romeo and Juliet was the most tragic love story in history. (or if you disagree) Romeo and Juliet was the most simpleminded story ever! after that you should use some evidents to back up your claim. basic reasons why you think what you think. I hope i helped <3 (writing is sumthin dats simple for me lemme kno if u need anymore help)