During he Pilgrim's Progress, both Christian and his companion are
detained as they pass through Vanity Fair, because of their open disdain about the contents of the area.
She liked punching the boring teachers
First of all, you need to know what an appositive is.
It is a noun or a noun phrase that is used to modify, or refer to another noun which is usually located next to the appositive. In this case, the appositive phrase is Lucinda Gonzalez, because it modifies the noun <em>student.</em>
"in the snow *was one of.."
"offers more *then a time for *children to have fun.."
"to do in the winter now and it's unfortunate.."
"..find the wintertime unpleasant"
"should *go outside and enjoy.."
"I am glad I grew up where it snows"
I recommend these changes as well as limiting the number of times you say snow and replace it with a different word, as well as using more descriptive adjectives
Youth, Awe And Isolation are all themes portrayed in The White Heron
