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yes it's good and I like how you rhyme. keep up the great job:) don't listen to others but if someone and another of others say sum don't take it the wrong way take it as a feedback to know what's wrong with your poem!!!
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Mr Brown decided to help the elderly people to get the building which they would want to make use of,I thought it was a very stupid idea since he can't afford for his own family,and i always had a question in my mind about why he helps too much,but Mr Brown once said something to me,"Helping others is like paving a way to a brighter future of your own",that was when I decided to always do good to others and help those who we can support and also assist does who needs help.
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- Complainer
- Whiner
- Bellyacher
- Protester
- Fusser