It looks great! One thing I always struggle with as well is dividing paragraphs. This is important, it looks neater and is professional.
I think you should also add how at first, Hades and Persephone refuse to help, but then Orpheus uses his harp and sings about his grief, which persuades them to help Orpheus.
Good luck!
Answer:
Explanation:
Last July, my family and I traveled to London, it was my mum’s birthday, she turned 50! When we arrived at the hotel we were shocked by the long queue at the check in desk. The receptionist was super nice upgraded us to a beautiful suite. Left our luggage and headed to Harrods. The weather was incredible it was sunny and breezy. Since we were tired we did not stay out for long.
The next morning, my brother and I went on an adventure on our own. We took a taxi to the London Eye, it was phenomenal! Loved the ride and the views. After lunch we had fish and chips it was delicious.
We could make sandwiches or we could go to a restaurant because you need a comma before FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)
Answer:
No
Explanation:
Because we need education and we are fine with 2 days
It’s true because your teacher says so
